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My expectations
« on: October 21, 2012, 06:56:58 PM »
Even if i thought about looking elsewhere i still found myself gazing at d skies....This tym i paid much attention to fine details ignoring d beauty of fireflies....it was cold outside nd this field was wet but i didnt even notice....it seemed as if d hands of time stopped moving nd i lost d essence of what ought to 2 b and what truly is.....Up there in d skies i knew i would but smehw i wasn't...Was this a dream,fantasy or misplaced affection coupled with an ignorant obsession of false reality?....this dice kept rolling in my mind nd each time, my heart skipped a beat....d beauty i perceived made me fall deeper nd all i saw was a picture of that great seat.....In as much as the stars didnt shine as they did yesterday...all i murmured was ''i'll definitely get there''.

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My expectations
« on: October 21, 2012, 06:56:58 PM »

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Re: My expectations
« Reply #1 on: October 21, 2012, 08:30:29 PM »
*motivating*

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Re: My expectations
« Reply #2 on: October 22, 2012, 03:06:36 AM »
Inspiring

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Re: My expectations
« Reply #3 on: October 22, 2012, 03:13:43 AM »
nice...been long i wrote one....u could edit the skies to sky...there is only one sky...love it

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Re: My expectations
« Reply #4 on: October 22, 2012, 04:03:47 AM »
Yeah inspiring...

@Rock_hard: There is nothing wrong in using skies. This is defined as "Third person singular present tense of sky"

Besides artists (including poets) are allowed some laxity in lexis.

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Re: My expectations
« Reply #5 on: October 22, 2012, 08:11:59 AM »
third person singular ke

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Re: My expectations
« Reply #6 on: October 25, 2012, 06:35:50 PM »
Hmmm

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Re: My expectations
« Reply #7 on: October 26, 2012, 03:07:35 AM »
Lexis nd structure!

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Re: My expectations
« Reply #8 on: October 26, 2012, 06:41:29 AM »
Pussylicious, where u dey since

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Re: My expectations
« Reply #9 on: October 26, 2012, 07:36:57 AM »

"Third person singular present tense"